To not thinkI stand within the beam of the spotlight. The light burns and blinds me.To not think
I wish to shut the light away, To see the darkness, To hear the silence, And within it, to not think.
I am an arm's length from my goal, An arm's length from the sweet embrace of darkness, The darkness that will bring ease to my aching body, and rest to my pained mind; The darkness that will finally allow me one small grace - To not think.
I hold my arm out, but its length
Light and DarknessA ring of light, A ring of darkness, Never merging, Ever fighting.Light and Darkness
I stand in one, You stand in the other, Ever reaching, Never touching.
My arm's reach - the reach of light, Your arm's length - the depth of darkness, Never closer, Ever farther.
My eyes of crimson, Your eyes of crimson, Ever looking, Never seeing.
My spinning vortex
Do as you're toldI don’t need this pressure,Do as you're told
I don’t need this stress,
This is my refresher
Course in my distress.
I don’t need your orders,
I don’t need your lies,
You can’t set me borders,
I would rather die.
Because the light you brought into my life has waned so quickly
And all that’s left of it is cold.
My heart is broken and my soul yelps meekly
And it’s a sad sight to behold.
“Do as you’re told.”
Set me free of this frustration,
Free my body and my soul.
I don’t need this aggravation,
I just need to have control. &
Me in the shadeOne soul, One body, One person without anybody. One fate, One life, Filled with anger, pain and strife.Me in the shade
One light, So far, And you don’t even know where you are. One end, So near, One existence filled with fear.
Chorus: That’s me in the shade That’s me in the darkness That’s me with the loneliness surrounding me, It’s me. That’s me in the shade, Me fooled by my blindness And I won’t know myself before this darkness fades. That’s me in the shade
One heart, Ripped open, One heart that’s b
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I hate quotations. Tell me what you know.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson.
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~I thought what I'd do was, I'd pretend I was one of those deaf-mutes~
[Please insert page link, witty remark or pointless fangirl/boy phrase here]
Second is my Naruto fic, "A Different Sort of Naruto", which splits from the canon at the end of the first arc of the second part of the Naruto manga, and is a planned SakuraXNaruto fic, with a lot of battles to make up for the mush (haven't written any battles yet, but haven't really gone to the mush either. It's still just a drama, and not a romance/action fic.) - Again, any pre-readers?
Third is my epitome of pervesity (although I'm not sure if that's a word), "The Bronze Ascendancy", which has as its focus an 18-year old teenager, in the end of highschool, who, one day, all of a sudden, finds out he has these amazing powers; telekinesis, telepathy-mind-reading, matter-manipulation (being able to turn one object into another), and many more, one of which, of course, is mind control (which is where the perversion kicks in). - Now, this one, I don't need pre-readers for, but I'd really like it if someone were to ask me to see it, so I can get a grasp on whether it sucks monkey-nuts or not. I don't really expect anyone to ask to see to see this one, because I understand the awkwardness of it all, and Ray, thought awesome most of the time, is kind of a tool when it comes to stories that go "below the belt-line", so to speak.
So, basically, any pre-readers?
Blech. Managed to write up that song you should see on the left, do some editing on another Ranma 1/2 fic I wrote a year ago (one I'm planning to post on fanfiction.net as soon as the newbie limitation wears off), AND get some work done on a Naruto fic I started a few months ago, but didn't continue.
Basically, right now I need pre-readers, beta-people, whatever you want to call them. Just to see if anyone enjoys my fics, at least, if not to get some actual writer-to-writer critique. If anyone would like to take up such a mantle, and is familiar with Ranma 1/2 and Naruto (that is, knows what's going on in the end of Ranma and what is going on these days in Naruto), PM me. I am in dire need of critique. Also, I am whiny, stubborn, and I make one hell of an egg salad!
Hey, don't look at me like that, you glomped first!
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Salva me, Salvabo te
OBAMA FOR PRESIDENT!
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